Uhh my brother got to go LA becouse he’s on break,It’s not fair!He there right now (probably sleeping) while I slave away at school,blogging,writing,looking at the clock like a dog looking through a window.my spring break is in April,APRIL!!!I always thought that spring break was a sign of spring starting,not being half-way over!Uhhh……well..got to go do some work..you know…cause I’m in school.
Check your spelling
Check your spaces. You forgot to capitalize and forgot to space. Also it is not ‘He there right now’. That is really incorrect grammar.
You need spaces at the end of periods.
Make it longer!